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I think I got carried away and made so much adjustments to the B section. Thats because we needed tat difference. Before it didnt sound so different to be the B section. With these new differences I think it sounded more like a different section.
take a look at the adjustments I made. I used a pedal tone to modulate to the B section. Notice that I didn't go with strict harmony rules. That will give your piece more freedom. And take a look at the B section. I kept some of your ideas and I re-worked most of the B section. Only to show you how to achieve a different sound than the A section.
Ceresz, I normally don't make changes to my student's pieces. Lessons from internet is kind of awkward and I can only show you my ideas through this way. This is our first piece so lets go on like this, our next piece I don't want to make any adjustments. I will just make suggestions.
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