ah, Nikolas, Nikolas, Nikolas....
I hate to do this to you, but....
I actually liked this
For game music (I'm not a great fan of most game music) it was wonderfully rich and dense.
I particularly liked the dense harmony and the polychords.
There's something about game music I find unsatisfying, generally. It's as though it's cinematic, yet "missing something". I understand that it's probably an inherant requirement of the genre. Happily, I didn't get that impression from your piece.
If you were to make me happy (and of course, that SHOULD be your prime goal in life
) I'd love to hear something of yours that is halfway between this and your string quartet.