Mano,
This is a lovely piece. It has something of "love" in the air... Who is Eva?
The rendering is not bad at all, if I may add as well!
I do see a little bit of static harmony, but it certainly is much more complex than the other works I've seen. And additionally, the orchestration works very well if I may add. (The middle section in minor, sounds really cliché though, I have to admit). But when the piano enters, everything is fixed again.
The strong modal sense works miracles in this work! Well done!
It has plenty of variation in who gets the themes, what's going on, why and because. All is there. It is a very well crafted piece! I'm not sure if I would change anything myself.
And what a nice and unexpected ending! Like saying hello, right before you leave the door!
but I feel that it has a point here.(thus: kudos!)
Well done!
I'm looking forward to the live recording.