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Old Jun 9 2007, 7:09 AM
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Anyway, I it looks good. I will take a much closer look at it and add more comments if I have any.
Ooops, I noticed a mistake (probably a typo of mine) in the harmonization of the subject, when it is in the bass. In measure 1 (second system), beat 5, the upper voices must be D A D, not D B D or that is outlining a VI chord in D in the 6:4 position... As it is preceded by a +4 chord in D, it must go to I6, not VI6:4...

Do you agree?