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to Frantz
The fact that you added a another voice is an honour, it means something in you started to resonate and inspired you. what more could I possably achieve? 
It works like a contemporary addition to me in a improvisational style (especially the syncope's)
the only thing that puzzled me is the gap in the middle of the accompaniment.
You know, I sometimes think that a good piece of music has a secret melody, "invisible" to the ear but present in the subconscious. I often "invent/improvise" melodies to music while listening, especially when it is a well known piece, because you can project the improvised melody into the expected harmonies.
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hi Artisimo!
glad that you have appreciated my elaboration
yes, many pieces give me too that sensation of more things to be revealed, i love to work on others' works, it's like to a sort of conversation between the composer and me, where i comment the piece with new sounds instead of words. the gaps were left purposedly because i thinked that a newer melody extending itself all over the piece could be a too much heavy addition which could obscure the delicacy and tenderness of your composition, it's like spaces for breath and hear just your harmony.
best regards!!!!