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Old Jan 6 2006, 2:32 PM
frantz frantz is offline

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lovely romantic piece! relaxing and a bit sweet-sorrowful. just a thing: after the fortissimo chord at 1:50 i could expect the beginning of a more dramatic section, but you return to the former tranquil mood. a little deceptive, but just a little, the overall piece is very fine. just i thinked that in that moment you could start another and more contrastant section, maybe more emphatic, or maybe even on contrary, more bright and light-hearted, before returning to the former peaceful pace, because the material is very pregnant. anyway good job!
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