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Something I can say at first glance is that the playing/recordings isn't very tight at places. It's very unstable in rhythm, like the keyboards and drums. You need to start working a bit with the metronome. The beat is very important in this kind of rock music so you need to be able to get a steady rhythm so you can get that oomph out of it. Other than that I can't really say I like the music, there are some places that work, but of course that's my own subjective opinion. Something I reacted to is that I feel alot of your riffs has no aim, you're at many times just going up and down a scale, feels like there's not much of a "goal" at places if you get what I mean. I don't know if you're aiming to be real progressive, but if you are I'm afraid most of your stuff feels a bit ordinary.
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