wow!! fine piece! from the very beginning i was captured by its fascinating and elegiac mood and charming harmony! but i think that u could improve it greatly adding a second contrasting section, and perhaps later returning to the former mood!!!!! it ends definitely too much soon. the gentleness of the melody is so sweet and delightful that i wished it could last for at least 3 or 4 minutes. you are a very bad guy taking my pleasure away that rude way
other than that, wonderful job! congrats!