well first of all. Your counterpoint could be a lot better. Try something a little easier. Get a clear theme and then do like a canon or something.
You defy the rules of couterpoint 324059 times...but i do too lol so nobody cares anymore
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Your voices clash causing unfit dissonance (for the style, at least), but my true advice is like...restart. Get a clear theme! I can't hum anything from that piece!
Anyway..those are my two cents. Do you what you will, best of luck!!
Nico ^_^