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Old Jan 26 2006, 3:29 AM
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Quite a nice piece here!

I enjoyed the opening motif and the subsequent development. I did however find that transitions in the piano such as that around 1:20 were rather sudden and brusque. It happened several times throughout the piece, not only in the piano though. I also found that you jump from one theme to the next often without having truly explored each's potential. If that is what you intended, than I understand and retract my last statement.

However, overall a good piece. (The theme occurring around 2:14 is great!) Keep up the good work.
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