C-man swing: What's that instrument supposed to be??? The melody part i mean.
You need to take this somewhere else now, have a bridge, then return to the first idea maybe but you need to take it somewhere.
Stonecold: hehe, reminds me of Paris..almost...um, you could do more with
this too, if you wanted to, you said it was an experiment so..
but it has potential to go further
Waktz to Orleans: My favourite ensemble
. Nice, hope you're developing this 'cause it'll be groovy!
A 12-bar blues:hehehe, you know those films where they do everything sped up to show the events of the day or something...you're all thinking "what the fuck is she on about" aren't you? anyway, sounds like backing music to that. Cool! Very cute.
another 12-bar blues: Nice. Too short, actually i agree with Euler, they're all too short, you can do so much more with them.
Another viking: i thought for a minute that this was also meant to be jazz and i was trying to understand how it was possible for you to suddenly lose your ability writing in that style ohew! Um, i have to say it's not really my thing but that's irrelevant, i don't know that you quite hit the metal genre, i heard way too many clear notes...sorry if i'm offending anyone, *hides*..um.okay moving on...
I'm really amazed at how well you write jazz solos, did you just improvuse these and then write them down??? They sound like high-class impros but they're actually written down...!
Anyway, sorry for rambling so much, hope you can find some scrap of helpfulness in here. if you wanna know more about what I mean when I keep saying develop it more i'll try to elaborate for you...
Camilla ...sorry...