Hm... It's difficult for me to say something about it. It's very good at all...
But something what sounds like electric guitar chords are very sharp - if that was an idea, I'd leave it, but I noticed that it isn't good with rhytms in your composition - it seens like recording each instrument in different path, and that paths don't fit correctly. (I hope you understand what I have in mind - dor exaple 2.08-2.12, when piano comes). Of course - if that was your idea. . .
