C-Man Swing: Great melody on the vibes, make it longer and develop it more, throw in a few more instruments and it will be really great.
Same goes for basically everything else.
Achtung Viking, well midi dist. guitars don't do dist. guitars any justice whatsoever so if you were to record it it would sound a lot better. As far as the song, it kind of had a wierd structure and in the beginning it sounded like a cross between techno and 80's pop hehe. I'm sure if you develop that too it would sound better.
Basically, I know it's all ben said, but just develop these ideas into full length pieces and you will have something really good.
Good Job
