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Hello, welcome to YC as I'm sure someone else will say hello as well. Listening to it as I comment so if something is confusing just ask later. its a nice intro, you use the orchestra well, i like how you work your dynamics to change the tambre of the entire orchestra, sudden pause after the timpani hit is kind of odd, makes the piece sound disjunct.... build up.... fast section is nice, slow part after fast part is kind of like the disjunct timpani pause thingy, maybe you might want to try to work into that section a little better. slow part is nice, again this piece reminds me of another, but then again don't all of them, the transisiton was better with the dim. chord, still kind of abrupt. obviously there is a good knowledge of theory, if not kudos to natural ability, main theme back nice recap. nice piccardi (sp i know) at the end. Good work kept me interested the whole way through. Like i said earlier the only things that threw me off were the "disjunct transitions, and its not like its terribly bad, its more like almost being perfectly in tune but not quite and its slight nerve racking." anyways hope to see more stuff.
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