I have used the same motif, taken away a few rests and applied a completely new harmony - I am not sure if this harmony works that well, but I made sure that melody and harmony fit together a bit better. Is the last measure ok? I listened to it again and again and looked at it even more, and something told me that it was wrong - maybe I am wrong. Things have not really been working out since I got ill
Anyway, patiently waiting for a redo or another exercise
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