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Old Sep 9 2007, 12:00 AM
ChrisLK ChrisLK is offline

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I really loved this. It felt just gentle enough, without being bland. I loved the beginning, and the ending fit well enough---jarring, certainly, but then too "pretty" an ending wouldn't have fit the mood of the piece either. Plus, to me it suggested how people come together in the midst of "jarring" events, in the way violincello and the flute played in unison. But my favorite section had to be at 35. I noticed the way you used rests especially. Then the eighth notes starting at 41 were absolutely beautiful. SO perfect! As for criticism, I didn't care for the transition into the key change at 43-44, and the violincello seemed a little too soft to me, although that might've had more to do with my computer than the piece itself.

Anyway, I really liked the piece. Thanks for posting it for us all to listen to.
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