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Looks good, Anders! I'll agree with manossg, the score needs some attention... there are collisions all over it.
I would also question the use of the mordents (m.18, 50, 67) as old fashioned... I would write out the rhythmic figure instead.
Also, the on-the-beat grace notes in m.35/36/37... did you mean these to be before the beat? If they're on the beat, spare the player and simply write out the rhythm you want. If they are supposed to be before the beat, you need to put slashes on the grace notes' stem to indicate that.
Is this part of a larger piece? I'd love to see you use more of the chalumeau register.
Well done!
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