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Greetings, MonkeysAteMe,
shouldn't this be in the writer's block forum? It seems quite incomplete to me. You have some good melodies there. Also, I love the viola being used as the bass! It makes for a very witty (?) texture!
You have harmonized with fourths a lot. That, despite its archaic feel, gets a bit tiresome, after a while. Some transitions were not working very smoothly. Also, this is long. The modulation is a fresh touch, but it should have happened a lot earlier, IMO. Yes, and the score is a mess!
This can become a very fine piece of music! I see a lot of potential. Keep writing!
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