|
Just a few things. This is not my type of music, so take it all with a grain of salt.
I really miss a cello!!! For this kind of music and this length, I really think it needs more of a lower timbre thrown in.
With just these 3, I think you need to play around more with the dynamics. This goes at the same volume for long periods of time and that can get old quick. If you have ever been to a quartet recital in person, you will see that one of the most important aspects of a trio/quartet, is the dynamics.
Some double stops would also help to give this a little more variety.
You also didn't get the whole piece uploaded. it just sort of stops in mid swing.
Overall, it is good for what it is. Just not my style.
Ron
__________________
 "Anyone who has never made a mistake has never tried anything new." Albert Einstein
"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one." Albert Einstein
|