rolifer

This is getting better!! I can still see some more places where more dynamics can help.

Don't ever cut anything out of your music because someone else says it needs it. You alone have the vision you see of what you want your piece to be. I can see all of the dynamics in the score, I don't thinl they are showing up very well in the MP3. Part of that might be because you have the overall volume down very low.

I noticed in bar 58 you have a repeat in there that doesn't refer back to anywhere.

Also I would put the Link back in the first post cause some people will not go searching for it.

And it still just cuts off before the end. My guess is that the file was too big for the host site and they cut it off.

I saw a couple of places where you put some hairpins on a single note. This is very typical of having a note go louder or softer and I would suggest that you use this a little bit nore as well.

Like I said, it is getting better!!!

Ron