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Good work - nice use of lyrical melodies over those alternating patterns.
Obviously two minutes doesn't provide a huge amount of scope for development (I should know), but you managed to make it quite structurally sound nonetheless.
I must say that I too found the conclusion slightly inappropriate, given that you ended on what felt like chord V. But you were time-limited, I suppose, and the other elements of the piece which I enjoyed make this a minor quibble really.
Thanks for sharing!
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