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I was impressed by the sense of motion you create in this piece, along with the rhythms and strong harmonic cohesion. Good structure, too.
While the ending is sufficiently humorous, I would have preferred to hear something more dramatic, perhaps a build-up followed by each player finishing simultaneously.
Your score looks OK to me, just watch out for elements crashing into one another.
If you can, try to assemble some live players to get a recording of this - I'm positive they'd enjoy it a lot.
Well done!
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