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A very fine piece which captures the intended mood excellently with its steady harmonic motion. Well done.
I thought the ending was fine - but I wonder if instead of the last D in the basso ostinato you couldn't repeat the opening 4 bars of it coming back to a whole note D while the upper parts hold their notes with a gradual diminuendo. Well, I thought the basso ostinato was superb and added a lot to the piece so repeating it at the end might work - just an idea - endings are always tricky.
Thanks for sharing this very enjoyable piece.
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