Paginani

1st Movement.

The beginning is full of tension, and I believe it creates the mood you were aiming for.
The contrast with the piano(cantabile) makes the piece quite interesting, and adds a little variation(something I feel is very neccesary, especially in longer pieces)
The recapitulation of the first theme was well done and rounds of the piece nicely.

2nd Movement.

I don't love the part in m.14 where everything drops away(ok except the sustained note on the violin) to leave the cello, and only for one measure?

The piano entry is nice!

The piece is quite peaceful with some "glorious" moments.

The ending is good, but I would personally write the notes as whole notes with pauses on.

I think some of the violin parts can easily get a bit... screechy, but if the player is good enough this probably won't be a problem.

3rd Movement.

Energetic, with a noble part, and a bit of melancholy.
It get's a bit chaotic in places, but I guess that can also count as a tecnique.
The ending is very nice.



As a whole.

I can see that you put a lot of work into this piece, and with a cleaned up score it ought to look very nice.
I think the length scares people off. Try posting the three seperately and I'm sure you'll get more reviews!

Keep up the good work!