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Old Dec 4 2007, 4:24 PM
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Originally Posted by thatguy View Post
um....about the music....

the beginning is nice, it does sound very familiar but cant pinpoint it out, meh....serene opening, ooohh i like the transition to minor, very nice, the held notes i would have only done once in the middle of the minor section, but thats opinion, still works.....the repeat in major is nice

overall i did get bored with the left hand on the piano, but i think you varied the melody enough to where it didnt really matter. sounded good and hope to hear more from you soon!
Hey,
Thanks! I've noticed the left hand is quite repetitive and I'm working on a few variations for it.
Thanks for the advice, hopefully future compositions will be a lot better as a result
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