I think that motive sucks!!

(j/k... just hard to use)
But I tried to write a few ideas on it(short of course). It gave me a headache so I quit. The ideas are just that and completely formless but the first is sorta based on the ground-bass and the second is more canonic like.
mp3's are at
12-13-2007-Motive idea 1.mp3
and
12-13-2007-Motive idea 2.mp3
Hopefully they don't suck to much ;/