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Hey, dude. Well, let's say that it lacks a clear tonal center, even considering the heavy use of modulations. Part of that is that I can tell how the clarinet is taking second place to the flute and acting as harmonizer to a somewhat abstract melody. To compound this, your implied harmonies don't always match the keys you're in. For example, measure 17 - should this really be f major or f minor, and does it matter? (although I really do like the chromatic mediant modulation - good on you there) Is what I'm saying making sense?
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