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Originally Posted by Chris
Hey guys, thanks for all the advice. I read over the lessons again and started orchestrating on paper today. I'd appreciate some feedback on what I came up with:
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Chris, please give me a few days to re-examine you exercise.
Being Christmas and all I have a whole lot of cooking to do for Monday night (traditionally for French Canadians, Christmas is usually celebrated on the eve).
I can tell you right away that I understand where you were going with this. I'm not entirely convinced it works on such a small scale. Meaning that with a brief exercise like this you will have more look looking for homogeneity and smooth transition from material to material.
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