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I am aware of these two problems, and I fixed the first part to your suggestions (I thought that actually did sound better, thanks!). However, although the next to last measure, although hard I admit, is better to be left alone. I like the fullness of the chords there. I also tried changing it a multitude of ways, and I cannot find something better souding than what I have written.
What I think could be is, if the player could not possibly play it, I will write an ossia with the next best playability.
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