1st piano piece

This is my first piano piece I am posting on young composers. It is also my first time using secondary dominates in a composition sense i am kinda new at composing and just finished my second semester of Theory. Hope you enjoy!

Sorry for not being able to post a midi file i only have Note Pad which cant convert files into midi format.
Hazzah I just downloaded notepad 2008 which lets me save as midi.

I think it's a nice little piece. I do have some notes. The part over the two-note chords seems stagnated(from bar 9). I think altering the righthand part a bit can overcome this. Also the form is missing a bit. I think i feel this way because it ends after a new variation. If you'd add a repeating section before ending the form would be more clear. I think the first motive is nice. With some rewriting this can be good.

Originally Posted by gijs van beusekom

I think it's a nice little piece. I do have some notes. The part over the two-note chords seems stagnated(from bar 9). I think altering the righthand part a bit can overcome this. Also the form is missing a bit. I think i feel this way because it ends after a new variation. If you'd add a repeating section before ending the form would be more clear. I think the first motive is nice. With some rewriting this can be good.

Thanks for your input. I will definitely try and make those changes to see how it sounds.

I also think it is good for a first piano piece. One thing I think, maybe, that you forgot was to add the F-sharp in measure 8. You have an F-sharp on the first F, but not the lower one. Maybe that is what you wanted, but just so you know. But good job on your first piano. (I like the key of G as well)

Originally Posted by SSUChris

I also think it is good for a first piano piece. One thing I think, maybe, that you forgot was to add the F-sharp in measure 8. You have an F-sharp on the first F, but not the lower one. Maybe that is what you wanted, but just so you know. But good job on your first piano. (I like the key of G as well)

I am glad you liked it.

I just added the midi file.