im writing this as i listen along with ur piece so...
beginning is excellent, grabbed attention really fast, the two beat of drum was a good hint and then flute ...sudden crecendo, change of theme--its sort of like a chase. great choice of instruments. maybe a more unique melody would make this piece a great adventure
toward the end i like the contrast between the woodwinds and the sudden string....slowing down...end...i enjoyed it mr.thatguy
