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very small orchestra...therefore, i feel it sounds sorta...thin. Maybe you can try to double the woodwinds and the trumpets/low brass to stretch your chords. lots of dissonance...i like some resolutions, but really, i'm not a big fan of extended dissonance...but as for the beginning, it sounds very serene and quiet...lots of note doubling and not a lot of rich chords. that could be the mood you're going for though. kinda gets boring in the middle. Yeah..the big hit sounded weak and thin. Try filling up the chords more with more instruments. I like the melodic element of that section.
sorry if i come off as really critical...i'm just not a big fan of atonality. You did manage to infuse a sense of melody at certain points, and that made it a worthwhile listen for me :]. but yes. fill up some of the chords in certain sections.
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