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Old Jan 9 2008, 2:58 AM
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It has the energy of a fanfare, and I like the introduction, but I feel it fails to achieve a significant climax, which would make it quite interesting.

Either lengthen or change it at 0:10-ish, after which it just seems to repeat.

This could be quite a nice piece...

Keep up the good work!
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