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This is not very good at all.. next time start with some kind of theme--solid, simple, memorable if possible. I've listened to it about six times now and I remember nothing. If someone asked me how it went, I'd have no response because the individual lines of music aren't strong. Pay a little more attention to clarity of melody and get involved maybe with a harmony/theory class offered at your high school to improve your skills in harmonic clarity. If you put a little thought into it outside of staring into the Finale window in the moment trying to come up with quality music I'm sure you'll be successful. I know you're not writing the final movement of the Jupiter symphony here, but if you learn theory (either at this site which is a good oppurtunity or from your school) and put a little more thought into your work, you'll have a very good fanfare to impress your friends with.
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