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Old Jan 20 2008, 10:55 AM
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When I listened to this, I was a bit surprised that it was supposed to be a field show- if you were to take that slower, it would sound like some sort of imperial march.

Anyway, onto the point. I think you could now use a section that brings the listener away from that regal and uptight feel that you have created. I'm not sure if necessarily an adagio or serene section would work for a field show, but something a little less uptight, just as I said before.
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