Hey! Nice to see you again.
I like bits and pieces of it. I really the dissonance and the texture you're creating. I have a question however, are planning on creating a motif-ish-melody? I think its crying for one. There are times where its just all sound and music and its slightly boring (Sorry!!

) But other that i really enjoyed it. A lot the rythem build ups you are using and echoing between voices is nice. Good Luck!