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I enjoyed your use of dissonances in most places in this piece, and you linked the sections together well.
This piece might get a bit "muddy" in places, with the close harmonies between the low instruments.
For some reason, the last part in bar 66 where the celli have the same rythmic figure bothers me.
Nice piece.
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Melody for Trombone and Piano
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Originally Posted by Berlioz
MY EYES!!!
They're BLEEDING!!! AND MELTING!!! AND...
ARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !
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