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Old Jan 27 2008, 7:24 PM
frantz frantz is offline

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Originally Posted by tenor10 View Post
Hey there.
There are some nice things going on, but I feel like the lines guitar, strings, vibraphone whatever the insturmentation is, they arnt fitting together in a lovely way. It feels this three independent lines (not like a fugue) that you just throwed together. It doesnt make me meditate and think of love. I would suggest trying to make them flow and connect more.
well, love is not always lovely or like a fugue or even makes us think of love ever.
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