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I felt the ending worked well enough, maybe having a sustained discordant chord that eventually resolves to an ending chord? It felt a little sudden, I guess I am just suggesting build up to more.
I felt that the piano got a little redundant throughout, and maybe in the second half play around more with the instrumentation. It kind of felt, a little samey. But this is a very minor qualm because I liked it throughout and I don't see any drastic need to change anything frankly.
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