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Beautiful piece you've got there. Absolutely love m.32, when the mood changes from a somber death march to a gay celebration. Reminds me, on this cold winter night, that spring is just around the corner.
However, I take issue with the way you have notated your rhythms. I feel that your placement of the barlines doesn't always reflect the actual points of emphasis in the music. I find that, in many parts of the piece, I'll "feel" the barlines somewhere completely different than where you've got them notated.
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