This is an updated audio of Dawn - no score because its currently a mess
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Isn't a brilliant audio because I am currently not on my main computer and the crecs/dim markings aren't really being brought out and I just thought I would share where my piece is heading and get some comments. Feel free to rip it to shreds - only way I will learn.
The idea I have had with Dawn is to use the first 15 as a template for the piece and at the end the "intro" will return but in an extended and more developed way. As you will hopefully hear the second section is based on the triplet movement and gets some movement finally going in the piano albeit it being arpeggiated (sp?) movement. My next step in section three is to move use the piano for a melody and move the tonal center to a different key.
I know I wanted to get it done by today so I could get it bound but the need for sleep stopped me last night and I found a guy who will bind it for me over the weekend.
Dawn @ AcidPlanet