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Old Feb 1 2008, 5:25 PM
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I wasn't going to put another update on here until I had finished but I am slightly unsure about section 3.

Section 1/2 have been quite melodic and in Eb major so for Section 3, I wanted to break loose from that key and this is what I came up with.

The violin is still melodic but not so much as before and the piano alternates between chordal movement and arpeggio movement. It travels through Ab, F and A majors.

The section isn't yet finished as you can hear there are a couple of chords which need working on and the phrasing needs work (at the mo its all piano). And I might extend it to explore another key ... but I need some opinions on the section so far. It sounds like it belongs but doesn't and I am not sure if I am 100% convinced it works.

No score as it is such a mess.

Dawn Updated @ Acid Planet
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