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Originally Posted by frantz
i am not a big fan of this style but i enjoyed a lot this piece. very well fashioned, fluent and emotional. great textures too. congrats!
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Frantz
Thanks for taking the time to comment. I have just started school again and things are busy right now, so I have not been quick getting back here.
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Originally Posted by gms5287
This is really good! I like your handling over counterpoint, this is definitely going to be a good work for you. The style and everything is very cohesive, and this is just a midi. Very mature writing. I have a problem though with the piece harmonically about 2 minutes in, the vocabulary harmonically becomes drastically different and I just don't think fits what you stated very effectively in the first 90 seconds of the piece. If you're writing mostly dissonant intervals and textures, then all of a sudden you get these very open sonorities and what sounds like to be very tonal gestures, that can be a bit jarring and takes away from the overall cohesiveness. That just takes a little bit more effort on your part. I don't have a score so I can't say much else, happy writing.
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gms5287
In some of my pieces lately, I have been going with large contrasts between an A and B parts. Maybe I am taking the contrasts too far. Regardless, thank you for taking the time to comment on this.
Vince
I have added the score in the opening thread. A lot of the markings are for trying to get a more humanized playback and would not be there for the final score.
I am still curious as to what you think of Trojan Asteroids.
Thanks guys for taking the time to comment.
Ron