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Old Feb 4 2008, 12:46 AM
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Very nice work!! this piece was well crafted and you did an excellent job making it as a whole, not just a bunch of sections. i thought it was an "ok" piece until the F section. i was blown away at your use of instruments AND especially the content. the 5/8 section was awesome! i also like the G section as well, nice blend of sections there and throught. my slight complaints (and i do mean slight) were the transition to the E section and the last bar. i think the chords were weak leading to the E section, ill have to look at the score again but it just didnt seem to fit ( at least for me). ill get back to you on that. also, even though i throughly enjoyed the ending recap, the last bar i didnt even hear the horn which judging by the score would have sounded really cool, i just couldnt hear it. all in all though, kudos on such a fine work, i really enjoyed its classical style and your voice shined magnificantly. hope to hear more from you soon, although youre going down in the monthly comp.

vince
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