J4: hey thanks for the comment and time
about the brass, i did use brass in a rougher version, it just didnt work out as well. its funny because the way i have it now is how i first started it, then went through various trials because i SUCK at orchestration......lol....anyway...about the idea of a multi-movement work, hmmm, interesting, i think ill consider. thanks again for your critique
Furanku: thanks! im glad you enjoyed it!