James
Your choice....
You tell me what you want...
My honest opinion or fluff?
I changed my mind, I will not let you make the choice just because I think you would want my honest opinion.
I went thru this 3 times and I don't see it.
The variations are great, the orchestration works, but who in their right mind would want to listen to 9 1/2 minutes of John Brown's Ford had a puncture in his tire, just to learn he patched it up with chewing gum?
I really like your original material and see the quality of work here

, but I go back to who would want to hear it this done over and over.
Is this being too harsh? Will you now hate me forever?

Or can you accept one idiots honest opinion?
I still hope you win the competition.
Ron