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Well monkey, listening to your piece, overall it's good. Don't hate me monkey for i know i couldn't do better =D but I just found at times it seemed a little repetitive. It could be because i'm coming from the world of rock and roll/heavy metal and my ear isn't used to long pieces of purely chamber music, but there might of been a few times where my interests diminished slightly. By no means am i saying this is a bad piece, it was quite good actually, perhaps you could variate the motifs differently every so often? Maybe through in some pizzicato perhaps somewhere, spice it up a little.
And as i've stated before, this could be simply because i'm coming from the world of heavy metal/ rock and roll. Perhaps my ear isn't trained for such a musical piece quite yet, but overall very very very nice work.
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