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good job capturing the style, Virtualshock.
A few comments...
-my ear wanted to hear the vln. go up to the G on the downbt. of 29 (adding a 9th)...that's just personal preference.
-also, while I realize your other phrase is a 5-bar-group in the tarantella, the end threw me off because I was expecting 2 4-bar phrases (it seems you're thinking 2 groups of 3 bars for the last 6 msrs). Because of this, it seemed like you need one extra bar at the end....Maybe if you changed the vln's C# in ms. 73 to an E it would cue the listener in to the end of the group and prepare for the final half-phrase.
But bravo on trying your hand at a few different mvts. all in the baroque!
Brooks
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