haha thank you all for those comments. Nice to see a mixture of posts. I didnt even realise that people had replied to it, hence my reply is delayed. *shakes fist at YC for not sending an email
* ....only joking lol.
Now, with the main theme...do you think it needs expanding. I believe it to be too melancholy...and repetitive. And if so...how do you think i could go about doing it.
yes, i believe i have plagerised Granados in his Marzurka (opus number is unknown to me)...but if it is...i will be utterly upset...coz i like this composition.
Uhmm....and yes...a score will ONE DAY be uploaded lol.
Two days ago, i went back to it again, and just improvised for a while...particuarly the transition from the slow section to the fast. I have really hurt myself in doing so, coz when i compose at the piano (improv) i usually hammer it out nail and tong. But with this, i have come up with a great bridge to the main theme again. So, the score will take a LONG time to produce, as i am going to be really careful with it. I have started to write it out on paper...but ive kind of run out. (importing a new manuscript book soon hopefully).
Any more comments would be great...but remember lol...this piece is only...5 days? old now.
So dont be too mean
thanks again guys for the comments.