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Old Feb 10 2008, 2:03 PM
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yes, i understand.. well, I said the b9 as an example... for now i want you to focus on tonality first, so, dont add any alterations outside the key.. but, give some color to the chords...

now you added a 2 and 6 for the last chord... it sounds good, but since we are dealing with quarter notes you might want to add a 3rd or 7th... i would suggest 7 to 6... or 6 to 7.. 3 to 2,, remember, it is jazz so dont be strict about rules.. there arent any... you did well in writing a 2-6 for G at the end... im just giving my opinions of what i would do, but that doesnt mean mine will sound any better.. so good job
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